Silence

                                                       SILENCE

Thoughts, O' thoughts, with yourself you share,

In silence deep, with no one to care.

True faces, you realize,

Of the ones, in disguise.

Or you ponder what may be,

What you further shall see ?

But for now, there's no agony of any kind,

Deep within,is silence in mind!

No people around, their own trumpet who blow,

Or their odious nature,who don't clearly show.

It's a world of your thoughts; for you, it's prime,

Although, it may be there, for a limited time.

Deep within, you hear different sounds,

You see, you speak, beyond the bounds!

Reviews

[smurfett]

Such serenity....this is a very peaceful and calming write poet. I have the feeling of being swept away with nothing but my own mind and thoughts...no one to interrupt me...sometimes we need this. Beautiful.
Thanks for sharing and the friend request...:)

[Saumya]

a very lovely and worth imbibing read....
something very significant here is that the words although being small, hold that immense potential to define everything in abundance about "silence"....

i loved the begining of this work, specially these lines
Thoughts, O' thoughts, with yourself you share,
In silence deep, with no one to care.
True faces, you realize,
Of the ones, in disguise.

very wonderfully crafted and placed....
well done:)

saumya

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

Thank you saumya !)

[Saumya]

you're welcome:)

[Distantview123]

To surround ourselves with silence, and our own thoughts, is something we should all do, at some point in every day. Our eyes, ears and minds are being bombarded with other people's ideas all the time. We all need to take time out and be with our inner selves, some of the time. A nicely penned piece. ~ Robert.

[TheJordBaker]

A very enjoyable read. I like your individual writing style. An interesting delve into silence and the ways of the mind and an inquisitive and exploratory piece which leaves me to ponder also. Thanks for sharing :)

[Coyote Poetry]

"True faces, you realize,
Of the ones, in disguise.
Or you ponder what may be,
What you further shall see ?"
I like the above lines. In silence we can try to find a better way to live and act. I like the flow and the thoughts in the poem. Made me think also. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Rosaria_V]

So beautifully done!!! Awesome job :)

[kublakhan27]

You have a deep understanding of life's ups and downs and how fickle emotions can be...nicely done.

[Joyce S. Greene]

These thoughts are obviously ones you feel deeply, Gurdeep. When you write from your soul, as you do, your words are powerful and meaningful. Keep writing!

[IonaFaith]

I really enjoy your style of writing; it's unusually old fashioned, it intrigues me.

[sivan]

nice rhyme... you write with such pleasant and perfect structure