Idolatry

If I didn't give him
his very own religion
what would've become of him?

What would've been the sum of him
when viewed with naked eyes?

Reviews

[ranscan]

Its an interesting idea developed here, the final line is tasty deserving of a tangent all its own. I see or perhaps its project, layers in this piece which have exploratory possibilities. The word "him" repeated in this work is unexpected, though I found it does not seem to burden this piece, in fact could be a part of its power.

[Gaia Octavia]

As always, thank you for your beautiful, kind, and well-thought-out review.