Pronoun

It's all in the process

Brain undergoing tempestuous peril

Chest rising and falling in monstrous waves

Lungs trying to keep pace with the out-pour of letters onto paper

The pen scribbling madly, furiously

The hand cramping and shaking, smudged with ink

The writer purging her being trying to come up with one word

A tremendously important word

An ever so simple yet endlessly infuriating pronoun

Author's Note

Written for Typetrigger topic.

Reviews

[G!o]

A writing, a good piece, all born as a feeble cry in a writer's mind. And this piece, are the ones i define as the unexpected gush of an excellent write.

Given this to write, honestly i would not manage but you've made it sound so simple in reading it.

Lovely.

ἑ Raven

[mrbigteddybear]

very good i like it. you get the feeling of being inside

[judith106]

This poem really got my attention. Your words to me describe a feeling that I have had so many times. I very much enjoyed it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Pronoun and the English language. More rules than we want to know. I enjoyed the poem. Led the reader to a very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Heromen Selena]

I really like this poem. I think everyone at some point of their lives as that moment where you know what word you want to say/write down but you can't think of it. The emotions your poem emits is perfect for that setting. I love the use of the words "tempestuous" and "monstrous". They invoke strong emotions and catch the readers attention to make them want to keep reading. Very good job and excellent poem :)

[Dayran]

A lovely picture of self expression ... in the passions that spurt ... to find that word to describe its feeling. Its is a bodily experience ... combined with mind ... that tries to say I am ... that I have something important I want to say ... not simply what others have always told me. Almost past the gate ... on this one ... stay with it.

[Poetic Beauty]

writing takes on a life of its own. I have searched for that certain word time and time again and usually use a thesaurus to try to find it. Great write.