Fallen

Darkness Rises
Heaven Dangles
Heroes fall before
Weeping angels
Heart is strangled
Dream is so real
Arms are tangled
Is this hope that i feel?
But why is it hope?
When i'm flat on the floor
Laying, praying, i cope

i'm standing right at the door.

But i gotta stand up now

No matter what i endeavor.

I don't need money or people

To power me and turn on my lever.

Whatever you will think, i will sing

No longer sink, I'm alone, no link.

No one can get to me, no one can break my wings.

I am king to nobody, nothing but my own life.

But my skin has fell victim to a strike of a knife.

And everyone is screaming, hands up, they are balling

I guess its because in their sick heads, i have finally fallen.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

This was right off the top of my head.

Reviews

[Rana]

Great rhymes, great lines.. Sort of inspiring too.. Some misplacement of words though.. And, yeah, also, ur style is cool.. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem came out very good.
"And everyone is screaming, hands up, they are balling
I guess its because in their sick heads, i have finally fallen."
I like the flow of thoughts leading to the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[KittyVenus]

brilliant! XD

i love the way you write with wiseness... if thats a word

[Saddam]

I am king to nobody, nothing but my own life.
But my skin has fell victim to a strike of a knife.

Very nice poetry. Well writen dear. Good place to words. Thanks for sharing.

[Luna Zerimar]

Wow. I really like "Whatever you will think, i will sing..No longer sink, I'm alone, no link...No one can get to me, no one can break my wings. I am king to nobody, nothing but my own life.But m skin has fell victim to a strike of a knife."