2 Sentence Survival

Just two sentences.....Just two.

My emotions, so close to boasting, i feel like im bleeding.

My heart rips apart, the pain, Man i've got to be sleeping.

Reviews

[Ghost Writer]

You never stop amazing me. No words except amazing come to mind,but there are so many more I could say but amazing fits you best.

[Saddam]

just two lines of internal emotions..... I am dead....great.

[Luna Zerimar]

Two sentences. Just two, & I'm in tears. Great one.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good use of words. A complete tale in so few words. I'm a epic writer. I'm impress when you can express yourself with a budget of words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[My-two-lives]

Sounds almost lyrical.. very interesting, what you're managed to accomplish in only a mere two sentences, well done. Good luck in the contest.

[KittyVenus]

so happy! yay! this is awesome for two lines