Random Haikus

These are just a few of my attempts at writing haikus...

now you turn away
my heart will always be a
casualty of war


Though you�re happy now,
I miss you in your absence.
Shot yourself last night.


Leeloo jumps up on
the tile counter with the sink
to lap from the tap.


i am still sleeping.
at least eyes are held shut.
now i can�t be hurt.

Reviews

[Alone In A Crowd]

The first one is beautiful, the second deep,blunt and emotional, the third has great descriptions for imagery, The fourth so true.