Why Me?

Why Me?:

 

Why me,

why did you have to pick me.

Is this a test,

or a prank you are playing.

 

There are more people closer to life than me,

Why not them.

You are yelling in my head,

it hurts so bad.

 

I see why,

there shall only be one to carry you berdon.

You choose me,

for my distance from life.

 

This freezing feeling,

you let it bite me.

Im comin,

im comin back to you from were i came.

 

 

Author's Note

this is another bad poem

Reviews

[Helena]

I thought this was very nice even though you didn't include the required phrase for the contest. Thank you for submitting this to "Keeping the Dream Alive" anyway. ~ Helena :)

[bear]

that was a beautiful poem. it really touches the heart and seems to express a kind of pain. that is why i like poetry it is a good why to get all the feelings out. i hope your pain laps over. and again thats a beautiful and amazing poem.

[Flame DM]

i dont think this is bad at all. raw emotion and a good write.

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[John A Common]

I dont think its bad,I dug it.