Even Angels Fall

about something....

-Verse One-

I’m dead and defeated
You brought me down in flames
I’m broken and beaten
I’ll never see the same

-Chorus-

They say that love is blind
Guess I couldn’t see your lies
They say it’ll be just fine
But I can’t find the light
And I need a reason why
‘Cause this will destroy me
I laid it all on the line
And this hell is only mine
And I’m running out of time
This is for you

-Verse Two-

I got over the first time
And I felt like a fool
I survived the second time
Now I can’t tell what’s true

-Chorus-

-Bridge x2-

Fool me once, shame on me
Fool me twice, shame on you

-Verse Three-

I would’ve done anything for you
Would’ve given you my all
I thought you were an angel
I guess even angels fall
How could you be like this
And let me blame myself
Thought you’d take me to heaven
But you dropped me off in hell

-Chorus x2-

 

Author's Note

Like my second piece ive ever written.
anything ppl can suggest to improve etc?

Reviews

[shadadakiya]

WOW that is awsome work really love it so true thank you write more

[mim]

it's good :) i can't really think o anything else to say. it's pretty. PUT THEM ALL UP BIIIIITCH xoxoxooxx

[Sarah]

Very cool, and I loved how it was written like a song. The best part is - the lyrics could fit any genre of music, depending on how you sing it. Very pretty. :)