Burning Inside

The poem searches for the 'freedom' of soul and words almost force humans to get rid of mental barriers; barriers related to religion, region, caste, creed, color or self-prejudice. Be free.

Inside the demons of mental chaos

there remains a permanent salvation,

which mesmerize the pureness of expression!

So subtle, that we don’t accept our death

truth is, we die when we breathe,

we inhale angers of thin-blood men

and we exhale love and kindness!

That you can’t escape ‘individual warming’

you retain the heat and don’t reflect,

icy thoughts melt, oh, drowning your soul!

The end is not when body is burnt,

fission of anger is decay

so, demon as you are, cry out loud

before you die

and let yourself evaporate

their negativity, give ’em back !

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Burning Inside'
Gaurav,
When reading someones' work sometimes I just wonder, "Why did they write this, what instigated it?" It is lovely how different we all are in our responses to life so this poem definitely can apply to everyone. To give the reader something that brings a question and/or brings thought is great. This poem is one of that kind.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Gaurav]

Thank you Kathy..i looked for freedom in these words..finding freedom isnt easy though

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Guarov,
Good point.. looking for freedom and finding it is not always easy. I find that we all are seeking something.
I wish you blessings,
Kathy

[Lydia Shutter]

We must learn to keep our minds off negativity. Those who spout forth with negative attitudes are the ones to avoid in life. Surrounding oneself with positivism and people who are kind is the way to go. Wise life advice in your words. I like it. Lydi**

[Gaurav]

It is a pleasure to get positive reviews from you Lydia. Appreciate it.

[Lilaa]

wow, such an amazing piece! Keep up the great work

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for the review Lilaa. Appreciate it.

[Bibliophile-Tipsy]

Just Stunning such a nice collection of words
Its sounds a perfect Rhyme..

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for your kind words. Appreciate it.

[XX]

Nice one! It's really well-written! Especially the lines --

So subtle, that we don’t accept our death
truth is, we die when we breathe,
we inhale angers of thin-blood men
and we exhale love and kindness!

I like the word choice! :)

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your kind words. Appreciate it.

[XX]

You're welcome. :)

[Austin Reale]

nice poem, it's real esoteric, out there you know? I can tell this is cultivated from the soul!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou Austin for your valuable comments. There is a deep-rooted desire to get free and soul wants to get free. So, yes, words are from the soul. Thanks again :)