Me

"Belief in someone out there, same as self, yet he would be me"

In truth

I feel the void

Vaccum is it

Devoid of things

And filled of nothing!

I see my presence

In vast sea

Dust and rust

Define me!

Wonder to normalcy

When evolution proceed

Only knowledge is retained!

On my knees

I see up

Thinking someone there

Looking down

Reflection in other world

Yet he would be me!

Reviews

[Randhir kaur]

Nicely penned..good piece..

[Gaurav]

Thank you for the review.

[Randhir kaur]

May not Mention..

[Gabby Nieves]

heeeeeeey nice poem, I barely find stuff I like on here but this was really cool

[Gaurav]

Appreciate it. Thanks :)

[zunie frost]

nice and tender !!!! love this thanks for sharing !!!

[Gaurav]

Thank you for kind words :)

[zunie frost]

welcome !!!!!!!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Curiosity to rationally question our existence can lead us to an unfathomable path of discoveries...

I loved the way this piece make us dwell in such wonders of life.
Beautiful, insightful poem.
Creativity and philosophy, entwined at their best.

[Gaurav]

Thank you again for reading my poems. It feels wonderful :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome.

[Nani Mino]

really you are very talented. i love it

[Gaurav]

Thank you for the appreciation.

[Maskedthoughts]

I love this poem. First of all the flow and structure is excellent. Best of all it evokes a feeling plus it makes you think. I found myself resonating with it greatly. Thanks for sharing!

[Gaurav]

Thank you so much for your kind words!