Happy being Christ

When love is bestowed without expectation, a new world develops - Happiness

Look at those happy souls

flowing with the wind of joy

shivering in enchantment

and feeling just a 'moment'

Look at them

greatness of now,

making strides through past and future!

In proximity

i feel their message,

a love to all

and enmity to none!

Strangeness of affection perhaps

grace to universe

look at them

we get joy in Christmas

they pour Christ-ness every day!

Author's Note

Reviews are welcome

Reviews

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Happiness increases, when shared. It is a viral thing.
A happy person leaves positivity like magic in his/her wake that lingers even after they are gone and touches more lives than we can fathom.

Beautiful piece.
I adore the way it is structured.

[Gaurav]

Thank you so much for your kind words :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome.

[wordman]

when your happy it seems to spread to others

[Gaurav]

True...its all about feeling. Thank you for the review

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

To know Christ is the best thing that could ever happen to a person- brings peace love freedom and so much more- blessings🌹

[Gaurav]

I agree. Knowing it can be the purpose :)

[Light and ashes]

This reminds me of the type of Christian I strive to be everyday. I was afraid when I saw the title of this. Some people desecrate the name of Christ for the sake of "metaphors," but this piece makes my soul smile. You honor God and Christians in this.

[Gaurav]

Ohh that's so great to know. My whole intention to write this was to honor those happy souls who try hard to give others peace and happiness. I guess they deserve to be called the children of God.

[armin]

Good poem, joyful and a perfect rhythm to get into the Christmas spirit.

Armin. ...

[Gaurav]

Yes, i think so. Christmas needs grace. Thanks for the review.

[Kirty labra]

It looks very joyfull to me, the way you have written this make me us feel that you would have been smiling while writing it. Great poem.

[Gaurav]

Thank you for the review Kirty :) Appreciate it

[Romalina]

Giving is the best thing to do in life :) and expecting anything in return simply defeats the purpose of giving :)
True to its very core, the meaning of the poem is beautiful and so is the way you have framed it :)

[Gaurav]

Thank you so much. I write but have lost words for the appreciation that you show. It shows how kind you are.

[Dayran]

You are absolutely correct. Its the mark of true love when we give of something without expecting anything in return.

[Gaurav]

Thank you for the nice gesture Dayran. It means a lot.

[Riddhi]

very nice poem keep it up.......

[Gaurav]

Thank you :)

[Alias]

lovely imagery of happiness and cheer, really makes the reader smile. Perhaps try to consider form more closely, the differing line lengths and breaks are a little jumpy, but I wouldn't change too much the content is lovely! Keep it up x

[Gaurav]

Thank you so much for the constructive criticism. Appreciate it.