Killing Emoticons

I know the world is driven by technology but words and feelings are not.

A wheel of feelings

curls my hair

through my brain

in vicinity of roots..

I look inside

and see infinity arise

deep within

galaxies of feeling reside..

I don't pick any

they come naturally

in safe heavens like earth 

i feel like a God..

But i remain in zero

to see circles of emotions

being a complex structure

helplessness binds me...

I wanna feel good

and say love to her

but killing emoticons

grew hatred inside..

Reviews

[zunie frost]

wow !!!!! so emotional !!!!!! a wonderful piece of work !!!
specially these lines
I look inside
and see infinity arise
deep within
galaxies of feeling reside..

I don't pick any
they come naturally
in safe heavens like earth
i feel like a God..
thanks for sharing

[Gaurav]

Thank you so much :) But you pasted lines from 'Who are you?' ;) I respect the intention though. Thanks

[zunie frost]

Ossp so sorry !!!! that was a mistake !!!!

[Gaurav]

Haha...that's completely fine. As i said, i love the intention here :)

[zunie frost]

hahhaha !!!! thank you !!!! you are welcome to visit my profile !!! if you like to !!!

[Aero]

Very well writtin and very mice wording.. good job man

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for your kind words man. Appreciate it.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Beautiful, profound piece of art!
Loved the flow and the imagery.
A few lines are awesome but my favourite is:

"I look inside
and see infinity arise
deep within
galaxies of feeling reside.."

Kudos!

[Gaurav]

You are spreading joys on Christmas. Like it. Thankyou.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome! :)

[Kay Zeaman]

Unique, insightful, and creative.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much Kay. Appreciate it.