Intimate Moments

some moments are lived forever...physical intimacy with your lover is one of them

I take the warmth

your love pouring on me,

when you touch my lips

why your lips shiver?

I caress your body

like a flower of autumn,

i want to color you

in my love..

Your body falls on me

and i accept it as gravity,

the smiling kiss from you

removes life's sadness..

The pink of your soul

my blackness coincide with,

the head is bowed

in your acceptance!!

Reviews

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Wow I loved the creative mention of gravity in this sensational romantic poem. Kudos poet.


I'm a newbie here, pls review, comment my first poem here, wud luv to know your thoughts, I'm navigating the site looking for poetic interaction,

[Gaurav]

Thank you Zaynab..sure i will read your writings :)
Glad to have you here

[Diane]

Very romantic and sensual poem. Depending on the reader I could go a lot farther than romantic. I thought the poem was a thumbs up.

[Gaurav]

Thank you Diane. Appreciate it.

[Taino]

Absolutely beautifully written. Emotions and passion join as one. Very well written.

[Gaurav]

Thank you Taino.

[ExquisiteEyes]

Beautiful and truly romantic. Full of intense passion.
"I caress your body
like a flower of autumn,
i want to color you
in my love.."........ Absolutely beautiful!!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for the amazing review.

[Riddhi]

Very nice poem...great work..Keep it up...

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for taking out time to review the work. Appreciate it.

[Dayran]

To be bowed in acceptance is certainly indicative of a new appreciation for the wondrous power of a woman. But I figure she'll like it better ... if it was simply a great friendship between equals.

[Gaurav]

Sure Sir. Completely agree. Equality is the most desirable trait. Here, though, it was a respect for the moment a lover gives to another. Appreciate your kind words.

[Neha Sharma]

That intensity! Beautifully composed.
I especially loved the line:
"Your body falls on me
and I accept it as gravity."

[Gaurav]

Thank you for your kind words. Appreciate it :)

[Neha Sharma]

U r welcome :)

[Joy James]

Quite romantic...I almost feel in love

[Gaurav]

Thanks a lot. Really appreciate the gesture :)

[Gabriel]

Beautiful poem.. very romantic and heartfelt. Nice fluidity as well.. thanks for the post.

[Gaurav]

Thank you for encouraging words man. Appreciate it a lot :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

An eloquent take at romance and sensuality!
I liked the flow and the subtle metaphors used.
Nicely penned!

[Gaurav]

Thank you for taking time out to review the work. Really appreciate it. Thanks again :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome.