Weaknesses

I am made of less than ordinary matter. It makes me weak.

Words are my strength

everything else is weakness,

i strive to survive

on my cowardice will...

I sugar quoted You

to find my worth,

in far-far inner core

my inadequacies shout...

Don't come closer

nor kiss my eyes,

i am inferior

in body and soul...

Some lives later

i hope to relive,

with ingredients of love

when I will be made...

Reviews

[Jesse Gonzalez]

The weak ones are those who cannot admit to themselves and another person that they themselves are weak. Those are brave words from a brave and fearless guy.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for your kind words Jesse. Appreciate it. But i don't appreciate you referring me a woman ;) haha...I respect women but don't dream to become one :P
..please correct it when you receive this message..

[Jesse Gonzalez]

Sorry, I thought you were someone else. I didn't look at your profile. I had a girl send me a few read requests and thought this was one of hers.

[Gaurav]

haha..no worries brother...i respect your intentions..thankyou..

[MelissaAndres]

Nice job. We all have those insecurities and people who make us feel weak. You have portrayed that well! :)

[Gaurav]

Thatnkyou for your kind words. Appreciate it a lot.

[MelissaAndres]

You are very welcome!

[A.marie.speaks]

Very well written. I liked every stanza. So powerfully written for a poem titled weakness. Loved it.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for the constructive review. Appreciate it.

[andrew mitchell]

Excellent work you have produced here. Thanks for sharing

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for your kind words. Appreciate it.

[Perkele.7885]

This is a fine work of poetry!
I had to read it a couple of times to capture the flow
but, when I did
I found that it warmed my heart for more!

[Gaurav]

That's a kind review from you. Thankyou for this. Appreciate it.

[zunie frost]

amazingly written !!!

Don't come closer
nor kiss my eyes,
i am inferior
in body and soul...
these lines are outstanding !!!
you are really talented !!!!
love this work 100 points

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your review. Appreciate it a lot.

[zunie frost]

was my pleasure

[Neha Sharma]

This is beautiful. Profound and thought-provoking.
Keep writing such alluring pieces. :)

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your kind words Neha. Really appreciate it.

[Neha Sharma]

U r welcome :)

[Lilaa]

Love this! Keep up the great work!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for the review. Appreciate it.

[bhavya]

Love this. We all fear deep inside to lose the one we love..depicts it well ..
keep writing :)

[Gaurav]

Thankyou Bhavya for your kind words. Appreciate it.

[Mahi sain(Mahesh)]

Really nice poem,
keep it up,
good luck,

[Gaurav]

Thankyou brother. Appreciate it.

[Mahi sain(Mahesh)]

Welcome bro.