Weaknesses

I am made of less than ordinary matter. It makes me weak.

Words are my strength

everything else is weakness,

i strive to survive

on my cowardice will...

I sugar quoted You

to find my worth,

in far-far inner core

my inadequacies shout...

Don't come closer

nor kiss my eyes,

i am inferior

in body and soul...

Some lives later

i hope to relive,

with ingredients of love

when I will be made...

Reviews

[Alias]

I love 'sugar quoted' too! Clever, powerful, beautiful - really starting to see you have a distinct style and its brilliant! Keep at it x

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for motivating me through your kind words. Appreciate it much.

[Aero]

"sugar quoted" definitely adding that to my arsenal haha very well written

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for the review. Appreciate it.

[Gabriel]

Nice poem.. again very introspective. Great work.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much brother. Really appreciate it.

[DeadSoulx_x]

Very nice. I really enjoyed it

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for the review. Appreciate your kind words.

[Riddhi]

Very nice poem.Great work....

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your kind words. Appreciate it.

[Tobias H. Reese]

Interesting piece. Thank you for sharing

[Gaurav]

Thank you for your kind words. Appreciate it.