It's kinda Love

It's about emotions, more than that it's Nature

I blame her audacity

for she occupied my thought,

her face got stuck

in the heart of my brain...

I look into my eyes

and find her soul,

i'll cease to exist

in love or without...

I walk miles

carrying her image,

she rests in me

but i am restless in love...

Silence is my home

in the city of crowds,

They say 'i am in love'

i nod in my head...

Reviews

[ExquisiteEyes]

Wonderfully written. The initial stages of being in love have been well described

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your kind words. Appreciate it.

[zunie frost]

such a beautiful write !!!!! well done !!!
100 points once again

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for those kind words. Appreciate it a lot.

[zunie frost]

welcome !!!!!!! happy new year

[Gaurav]

Happy new year..:)

[jesserose99]

wow, 'in the heart of my brain', that is a serious thought man!! I love it. absolutely. all very sweetly deep.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for those kind words. Appreciate it.

[hanir]

Yes... You're truly in love.
Nice write!
😊

[Gaurav]

I think so :)
Thankyou for your review.

[Lilaa]

Great work! really felt it :)

[Gaurav]

Thankyou Lila for taking out time to review the work. Appreciate it.

[Riddhi]

Short and nice poem which expresses feeling so nicely...Great work...Keep it up...

[Gaurav]

Thankyou Riddhi for your kind words. Appreciate it.

[Dayran]

The Buddha once said ... ' Love is a state of mind ' ... your poem certainly brings that to greater understanding.

[Gaurav]

That's one of the most positive and happy reviews my work got. This brings smile on my face. I am like Siddhartha in Herman Hesse's novel who left Buddha's teachings to pursue his own path. But ultimately everyone has to return to the Source. Thankyou so much Dayran.

[A.marie.speaks]

Short, sweet and simply put. Lovely. "Her face got stuck in the brain of my heart" is my favorite line. You have a great style!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for your kind words. Appreciate it.

[A.marie.speaks]

You're very welcome!

[zunie frost]

Wow last two lines were fantastic ! Really good

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for taking out time to review the work :)

[zunie frost]

Welcome !!:-)

[MelissaAndres]

I like your line: "in the heart of my brain". I like the entire poem but that line is my fave. Nice job!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou Melissa. Appreciate your kind words.

[MelissaAndres]

You are quite welcome!