When we talk

There is no better way to love life than to love someone

I noticed Words beginning from You

and care getting affection,

when love became fatal

we talked and you closed my eyes...

Yes, we talk but know this

i fly to come back at you, my source,

it's not span of time

your Unknown beauty curves me...

You love those who can't express

the reason words flow from you,

you teach me to calm down

i want my river to immerse in you, my sea...

Yes, we talk but know this

you let me see layers of ego inside,

we will talk to eternity

making words infinite as my love is...

Reviews

[dan]

Gauravv, My first review of your work and I am immediately impressed. You have a way of TWISTING words; by that I mean the word is spelled the same and means approx. the same, but it's just a little bit OFF, and I mean that as a compliment. It's the twisting of tone and nuance, almost musical in element. Sorry I'm a bit behind with my read requests, but please to continue to send them to me, I'll get to them ASAP. Nicely written! take care...dan

[Gaurav]

Thankyou Dan for taking out time to review the work. Oh, it is not easy to read all requests but we have to because it shows our compassion for fellow brothers. So, thankyou again for this. Appreciate it a lot..

[moog-drika]

Let me assume this writeup as a letter to life. Wow! the depiction showed an interesting relationship between you and the life you are living. such a strong piece. It was indeed a great read.

[Gaurav]

Thank you for such beautiful words :)

[moog-drika]

pleasure :')

[usman]

this is very awesome you really express your emotions here

[Gaurav]

Thank you Usman.

[ExquisiteEyes]

A really nice poem. It shows the spiritual side of love and not the passionate side only.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for the review :)

[Ella]

Beautiful piece. Really shows the essence of love.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for the positive review.

[Emily]

Great poem!
Keep on writing!!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your review Emily.

[Yehshaihah]

Gauravv,

this is wonderful, The rhythm in the images flows really well in the rhythm of the words

This is brilliant. Keep writing I can't wait to read more from you!

Ben

[Gaurav]

Thankyou Ben for your kind words. Appreciate it.

[Manisha]

You lines are beautiful :)

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for the review.

[Corbin Driver]

Great job!! Keep up the good writing!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your kind words. Appreciate it.

[andrew mitchell]

lol you say it all in one line in your author's note! A great write!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou Andrew for the review. Appreciate it.

[Nourhane]

It's beautiful, it moved my soul. I really like your word play, it brings me peace withing, yet my heart beats quite fast when I read it. (Note: I actually kept rereading it for over a 20 times)

[Gaurav]

I did not expect words to make such strong impact. It feels amazing to see my work giving positivity to you. Thankyou so much for your kind words. Appreciate it.