He needs Love

When i wake up

and see a night approaching,

i cry..

something out there

push me to bed,

i don't want nightmares...

Walking with you

to a certain distance

and returning home

- a dream once i saw..

something out there

remove the surface from earth

i don't want sky

'cause i will walk

i will not fly....

I want love

poured in honey of pureness,

alone though my body walk

i carry your memories...

don't give me dreams

i want love

Reviews

[sjgeorge35]

Extremely small b***h I have here with the title,.,. until I read the poem.

First part has a customary scrawl and stock, but it’s not mundane and more like point-blank. Good for this sort of fare in my opinion.

You do a great job surging the font of the speak, and though lines seem lapsed, there is something viable and alive in the way you drive this piece.

predictable but barren which gives it a weird edge.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for the review. Appreciate it.

[Dara]

Beautiful prose here and so true! Love is where it is at. To love and be loved in return will carry us to places we never have imagined before. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.

[Gaurav]

Thank you so much for those positive words. Appreciate it.

[PhoenixDown]

I have to say, I really enjoy reading your works in my off-time. I believe you have the ability to acquire everything you need and truly ask for.

[Gaurav]

That is a huge compliment. Thank you.

[e.renoldi]

How sweet! I enjoyed this a lot, especially the middle chunk. Great job :)

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for those kind words.

[A.marie.speaks]

Very nice work! I enjoyed reading this one very much.

[Gaurav]

Thanks a lot.

[Mister T.]

You often miss the things you did together with that person you once loved, the person that once loved you. It's not the person itself, it's everything you've experienced with each other, both the good and the bad times.
But, away from the memories, nice poem. Good read.

[Gaurav]

True indeed. Thankyou for the review.

[Stan Lee]

Some people are incapable of love... It's a curious thing, cant be turned off or on.... it just is.
Hope you find what you're looking for. :)

[Gaurav]

I know. Unless it is felt, it is a mere thing. Thankyou.

[Riddhi]

nice poem...great work..keep it up and thanks for sharing...

[Gaurav]

Thankyou..

[usman]

of course,you really deserve the real thing..but i suggest you make it more emotional..

[Gaurav]

Sure sir. Thankyou for the review.

[wordman]

yes i agree,the real thing,not memories

[Gaurav]

thankyou for your kind words.

[Jacob Clifford]

Very pertinent work, as always. You make your points well known and relatable.

[Gaurav]

thankyou brother..