Beautiful Now

Live in a moment before you realize that you lost infinite moments, life as we know it...

Now you know what you feel

so, don't shout in your head only,

express your anger, hug your love

mesmerize the audience 

and die tomorrow...

Now you surrender to Him

and let the wind be your GPS,

fly to universe of brotherhood

and return with humanity

let them born again,...

Now you flow with tears of affection

continue to kill shades of hatred,

now you laugh on bliss inside

'cause next is future

when moment will be a past...

So, now is to be a life

and now is to be your karma,

now can you live

in solitude and in peace

and in love...

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

You hit the nail my friend. Live the moment. Once the moment passes, it is gone...irreplaceable. How many does each person have? It is a toss-up question! Do not put off until tomorrow what you can experience together or with others today. Live the moment! When you have lived that moment, there will be time to return to your realities until your next necessary moment arrives!

[Gaurav]

Thank you for the insight and review. Appreciate it.

[Dayran]

The frightful yet exciting feel of pure emotions when you surrender to it fully. Hopefully the GPS works.

[Gaurav]

Thank you Dayran for your review.

[sansrity sinha]

wonderful! well done! very nicely explained ..
the last few lines says it all..

[sansrity sinha]

wonderful! well done! very nicely explained ..
the last few lines says it all..

[Gaurav]

Thank you Sansrity, appreciate it.

[Kathryn Smith]

This is beautiful. Touched my very soul. Well done my dear! x

[Gaurav]

Thank you Kathryn.

[wordman]

beautiful thoughts,life and karma!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your kind words.

[Ruth]

A dual edged sword is life...we can only master the positive elements if we have had courage to know the darker sides to existence also, clever piece :)

[Gaurav]

True. Thank you for the review.

[Willard Wells]

Lots of questions that come in life. I like the GPS reference to guide you. Nicely done.

[Gaurav]

Thank you Willard for the review. Appreciate it.

[Solar]

'So, now is to be a life
and now is to be your karma,'

The whole poem is a wonderful reminder to be as compassionate and passionate in the moment - given the impermanence of life.

Also reminded of Bhagavad Gita - in essence your sva-dharma,sva-bhava and 'karma-yoga' - so each individual, each moment is unique as well as universal ['fly to universe of brotherhood
and return with humanity']

[Gaurav]

No remark can as beautifully describe the intention behind this poem, as yours do. Thank you.

[Solar]

you are welcome!

[Sandra Nair]

'let the wind be your GPS'. I really loved the comparison. Never give up your skill and special way of writing.

[Gaurav]

Thank you for those kind words.

[Uche Paul]

For whatever we write today will speak tomorrow... Therefore, let's write whatever we wanna write today, but we've got to be careful, least we write that which will smear our face tomorrow. You know, what goes around comes around., and that which comes around is better heard... Hahahahahahaha... Nice Ideas Bro!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou brother for your review.