Inspired by Depression

No need to wait for miracles...sadness is the tool

In a far far universe away

someone like me  does not die

in excitement to see the world

someone like me does not live...

His happiness is unknown to him

and sadness is a tranquility to heart

when some rock cries in another dimension

He hugs it and feel enlightened..

I met Him through dreams

when a proverb of Greek Gods

"everything in moderation"

from His mouth

cleanse my soul, tormented demons..

I got up infinite mornings

only to die in the night

but when He killed my dreams

my eyes never shut...

Now i am awake in sadness

and cry in God's proximity

'cause there is none

who gets happy to find a bliss

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I'm 60 & about half the time I've been depressed. I've often credited my suicidal tendencies as the thing that has kept me alive all this time. It's cool to see someone write something of a similar idea. Your descriptions of depression are very unusual & original . . . some I recognize, others I do not. There's a flat tone to this writing that's realistic becuz depression is often not dramatic or full of tears, but just like flatlining the life out us.

[Gaurav]

I got a pretty late for appreciating your review. I was not very active here. But here i am back. How are you? thanks a lot for your words :)

[zaisham9393]

This is very relate able.Sometimes I feel depressed and what keeps me going is that I know this is a temporary feeling that will fade away with time and It does get better :).
Thank you for sharing :)!

[Gaurav]

I can understand. Happiness and sadness are relatively impermanent, yet sadly recurring.

[zaisham9393]

Yeah......

[Corbin Driver]

I really liked it, great work!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for the review.

[Ruth]

The close tangibleness of this is raw...understood and felt...

[Gaurav]

Thank you for kind words.

[wordman]

sounds like a spiritual journey,enjoyed the read !

[Gaurav]

Thank you for the review.

[Stan Lee]

Woo, that's kind of trippy. The flow and your brilliant use of varied vocabulary works together to make this one amazing poem!
My favorite part: "I got up infinite mornings; only to die in the night"
Fantastic Gauravv. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Gaurav]

Thank you. Appreciate it.

[Emily]

I really like this!
Keep up the great work!!

[Gaurav]

Thank you Emily