Song

I may be old and tired

but my love is young forever

I may be restless and hurt

but my life is getting deeper

In the sorrow and in pain

this moment is blurred

but when i see up to stars

a truth is discovered

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It's a long day to walk

It's a road less travelled

Won't you wish for a new way

that we can pray for together?

Let me show you a dream

where you won't be seeing homes

just a matter of space

and a beauty of ohm

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Reviews

[Robert Haigh]

Inner peace is worth more than all the gold in the world. Some people never find that inner peace.

[albee]

yes Anu..the last syllable rings like a bell jar, like a bowl of deep long tones of a life...
..."i am old, i am old i have my pant legs rolled..."
yet the heart is as fresh as youth where the road less traveled is a choice in the bowl...
i see mermaids leaping in this poem...

[Anuja Sharma]

I liked the way how you gave an ending to this piece. A really lovely and calm poem to me it is. Thanks for sharing.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

There is such an enlightened spiritual aspect to this incredible poem of yours. Thank you for sharing your art with us.

[Ruth]

Returning to a state of spiritual calm is important I think, materialism shall fade but returning to the all, the source, that is eternal if one can hush the outside from distracting thoughts and energy...good to read you today Gaurav, stay well :)