The Taker

Cinquain

Take me
I just want cash
It's a swap: me, my goal
I care about all things except
my soul.

Reviews

[zombiikillah666]

i knew it!!!!!
your a hooker....
hahahaha.
i figured this much...heehee.
kidding. i like this.... (:
awesometastically cooooool xD

[nyi]

really nice poem but why so short?

[Desert Dreamer]

Simple yet not so simple. So many of us trade our soul for money. Who is the taker? Is is our culture?

[A.Lee]

Just like the lives of so many people. Money has a lot of control over people, its truly amazing. And saddening. And frustrating! Nice work for a cinquain. I'm not usually fond of little poems like that, but I like this one.

[R E Tree]

Beautiful and it effects me with such a sensational feeling from the flow

[Truly Ross-Wisehart]

I may have read this a bit differently than intended. I read it as if it was one side of a conversation. Someone explaining their perspective, as it pertains to them, to another. I am not even sure if I can adequately explain it here.

Very good write. I like it very much.

~True

[MissWordSmith]

nice, but not what someone who doesn't care about their soul would say.
very sarcastic, that's what i like about it. keep it up!

[ashley]

Wow, this is fantastic. I'm blown away. Wow.