True Love

A few words for my good lady wife

Let marriage be our sanctuary
peacefulness our bed,
contentment be the pillow
upon which we rest our head,
and the love we've shared these many years
be woven as a quilt,
under which, within each other's arms,
we'll share this life we've built.

Author's Note

For my wife

Reviews

[nazia]

Extremely romantic and beautiful :) though personally I am really afraid of marriage and its baggage ;)..

[Gee]

Thank you.There need only be the baggage with which the pair of you turn up with.As with all of life you're going to have to deal with the usual ups and downs,but it's just a case of choosing very carefully who you choose to share your life.

[Jamestown]

You were absolutely right I do find this more then interesting, this is so
Beautiful, love it! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Gee]

Cheers JT,take care

[brezybaby3]

This is very good. The warmth and love shine through. Great job!

[Gee]

Thanks for reading and reviewing.Take care.

[Devin Mitchell Durbin]

I really enjoy this one. The warmth that is felt is stunning and comfortable.

[Gee]

Cheers Devin

[Chris]

A sweet pause to start a day.

[Gee]

Thanks Chris

[charlie]

Unabashed sweetness. There are some times when I write poems like this for my wife, and she adores them. Betcha yours did, too.
Well done - lovely poem

[Gee]

Cheers Charlie.Only readers of poems I pen are those that read on here.

[Closing Thoughts]

This is so incredibly sweet! The rhyme scheme really enhances the soft, gentle, loving message, and the whole poem flows so nicely. Beautiful job conveying love.

[Gee]

Thank you,very kind

[Tiana]

Truly a beautiful testament to the love you and your wife share ... May the woven quilt continue to warm and bless your marriage ... Loved this poem, Gee ...

[Gee]

Thanks,glad you enjoyed the read.Take care

[jacob erin-cilberto]

truthfully? i am ordinarily not a fan of rhyme.....but if it is this natural and free and easy in its delivery...it makes me dance.
you say you write simple...but there is definitely an audience for this kind of poetry...and your work will dazzle them.

[Gee]

Wasn't expecting that,thank you very much for a great review.

[wordman]

a beautiful tribute,loved it

[Gee]

Thanks,glad you enjoyed

[wordman]

you are welcome