A colours choir sang vibrantly

Spring...an oldie given an airing

Heads bowed as if in quiet prayer
the daffodils they swayed,
whilst dappled light through dancing trees
upon the lush grass played.

A bluebell sea rolled silently
to fallow fields yet sown,
o'er which in coming warmer months
a yellow quilt be thrown.

The thin veiled mists of early morn'
that washed the world with white,
cede to the over eager sun
days ever warm and bright.

A colours choir sang vibrantly
from life that bloomed anew,
to celebrate the birth of Spring
now another winter through.

Reviews

[Karmee]

Wonderful write here, enjoyed

[Gee]

Thank you kindly

[Patricia Wedel]

"The colours choir sang vibrantly...
Love the English style of gentleness...
truly, Pat

[Gee]

Thank you Patricia (twice)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Gee, how could we survive without
Bluebells... or Bluebirds in the Spring...
The blue of the sky in your eyes... the
sweetness of a young fawn curled up in the
meadow green... innocent of fear...

[Kelly Scheppers]

A gorgeous litany of spring and all its wonder! I am jumping in and reading more...

[Gee]

Thank you kindly, guess we get lucky sometimes and the right words fall into place

[Kelly Scheppers]

I'm always amazed how that happens - indeed, we are lucky!

[Silmara McGarry]

Wonderful indeed! In my opinion, 3rd stanza should be where it is and certainly, do not omit.

[Gee]

Thank you, I will leave well alone and remove the authors note.

[Silmara McGarry]

You are welcome!

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. I love the days of Spring. After the harshness of Winter. A warm Spring day. Perfect. Thank you Gee for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Gee]

Thank you for reviewing

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Relic]

This is beautifully written with an old classic feel to it I like.

[Gee]

You're very kind, thanks

[Jamestown]

Loved this read, imagery is fantastic and flow to match:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Gee]

Thanks JT, appreciate the review

[SJ Mullins]

I believe the third verse would make a great start to an already brilliant poem. I read it both ways and I do think that would make for a great start to this very lovely piece. I love it regardless of what you decide. :) Spring is one of my fave seasons with Autumn being my most fave. :)

[Gee]

Thank you, will have to make a decision at some stage

[SJ Mullins]

It's wonderful like it is, so regardless, it is well and beautifully written.

[θεά]

I am somehow missing the incompleteness you have mentioned about in your note. I feel this poem through the use of metonymous flowers captures the essence of spring in a consummate way. You have painted a picture of the beauteousness of spring and I appreciate your deft use of motion and adverbs to give it a naturalized flow.

Keep it up Gee.

Best, M.

[Gee]

Thank you. Perhaps should delete the note as the original poem only contained the 1st and 4th verses

[θεά ]

Ah! That explains it then. Either way, I liked reading it.