Pretty liars

Simple words on a false dawn

I asked the swaying daffodils
by whom they had been sent
I asked if spring their courier
they nodded in assent.

I asked the Apple blossom same
then snowdrops, bluebells too
they all said spring their courier
and that winter now was through.

So I took them at their floral word
believing all they said be true
but woke to find a world of white
"Oh what pretty liars you"

Author's Note

We have had a week of glorious sunshine then snowfall yesterday!

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

So all things pointed to spring, the buds , the colors, BUT, the next day it snowed so are the blossoms to blame? Or spring? Who’s is lying here?.
Nice piece Gee… don’t worry we had a cold snap and all the daffodils wilted, so sad….hope the straighten up soon😊
Best
B.

[Gee]

Hi Betty, a belated thank you.
Hope you are well

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome Gee, no apologies!
Best, B

[JE Falcon]

LOL, a nice poem with subtle humor added. This was a fun read. Thanks!

[Gee]

Thank you, your review is appreciated

[Shelley Warner]

Ah, that was funny. I wasn't expecting the ending, though the title should have warned me. Such nice floral communications only to have winter come back. Here in the Pacific NW, I was on a walk the other day and saw Trillium leaves, promising that the pretty, white, three-petaled blossoms will soon appear. I like your "about me" comment that your pieces are for those without code breaking skills.

[Gee]

Thanks Shelley.
" for those without code breaking skills" :)
I think my poetry must be some of the simplest on here as I write what I like to read, simple, easily understood verse, pose etc.

[Shelley Warner]

I like to write in simple language too.

[Ken Simm.]

Whimsical and so true at the moment.

[Gee]

Thank you Ken

[Cherrie]

Love the title and how you worked it around nature.

I love it and can relate. I got pelted with ice and snow ❄️ on the way home Thursday night and on April fool's woke to a heavy frost and blackice.
That old Winter just doesn't want to lay low.

[Gee]

Thanks Cherrie. Yep, winter ain't for budging :)

[Mark Henderson]

Beautiful imagery Gee. I enjoyed this poem thoroughly and will make sure to read through your catalogue of work.

[Gee]

Thanks Mark, remember when reading I am a hairy arsed construction worker who plays at this to pass time :))

[knighngale]

wow, he gave you flowers of lament, a perty liar, great read hon, :D

[Gee]

Thank you kindly :)

[knighngale]

most welcome, dear

[Relic]

You capitolized on nature's unexpected plans and made a great rhyming poem out of it. Nice writing, Gee. :)

[Gee]

Cheers Tim, appreciate you stopping by

[KAREN]

This was beautiful! And the ending was awesome! Thought Spring had arrived, then boom, here comes the cold snow!

[Gee]

Thank you Karen

[KAREN]

My pleasure!

[lightsong]

Awaaaa! this is so sweet, so lovely I adore it! today we have a warmer day BUT we had a VERY LONG TWO WEEKS OF COLDNESS AND SNOW AT THE MOUNTAINS! Thank You for the most delightful read dear Gee! Bright Happy Sunshine Vibes sent to there✨✨✨

[Gee]

Thank you kindly. Have a great day

[lightsong]

Have a great day You too my friend :>