Afterglow

Afterglow

She smiled, sighed, closed her eyes and remembered
every second of every hour of the night just passed.
She wouldn't shower, not today, perhaps not even tomorrow
instead she would wear him, inside and out
until the call of life forced her hand,
a hand that slid slowly down into an ever growing wetness.
She smiled, sighed, closed her eyes and remembered,
her hand his, her fingers him...

Author's Note

Not tried this genre before, as a bloke I'm far to "clumsy" :)

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Is this erotica or truthful desire that most will know about or wish to heck they could experience. Erotica is the truth of Man and Woman's physical needs. Perhaps it is without heart, perhaps not.. but its REALITY's flight away from or towards a love for togetherness with more than one outcome. 'Not an expert but feelings astray or at home are on a different plain from knowing that what one has is as near perfection as can be. You've written a first class piece about pleasure and what is its recipe, Gee.

[Michael Sun Bear]

Have you ever acted? Clearly you can cast yourself 100% into an alternate persona. Well done devoted family man!

[Gee]

Lol, thanks Michael.
Acted many a time to have my wicked way with women in the distant past!

[Lorry]

Well good morning Gee and firstly may I say congratulations on taking this on the female route, but apologise for this non review because I'll definitely be cancelled if I start talking about lady bits n bobs... so will just enquire about your health and ate those shiftless arseholes still giving you grief and excuses at work?
How's the weather? Did you see that ludicrous display at the weekend? And other manly conversational topics too! 😃

[Emunah June.]

Can I just say, I am absolutely loving the divine, feminine energy your poetry has? I think every girl has had a moment like this, where she's thinking about one or another, and it all is just a beautiful, self written erotica. The language is clumsy in the best way, perfectly mirroring the fantasizing and desire one has in times like these. Its brief, beautiful, relatable, and dare I say, delicious.

[Gee]

Thank you, appreciate your kind words

[Tan-90]

How sweet and innocent are those early days of courtship! Beautiful and delicately penned. Erotic yeeees… but when I read it, it takes me, more to a place of hope and longing, secret giggles..a moment in one’s life where for a short window, everything else feels less burdensome or significant, except for what happened last night.. :) delightful thank you for your words.

[Gee]

Thank you kindly

[Dylan Macadham]

Phewww! I need a smoke, and I don't smoke! ...
I do however have a few night-memories I summon now & then as needed :)
a Sexy write, Gee!

[Gee]

Thanks Dylan

[D. Mansfield]

I agree with everyone that this is so well written, tastful and erotic at once.

[Gee]

Thank you sir

[Betty Hermelee]

This really is true love, wow not to shower and keep his essence on her for days…. Amazing and so well expressed…. I can feel the passion in this poem immediately.. so well done Gee!
Warmly
B🌷🌷

[Gee]

Morning Betty, thank you.
Hope you are keeping well

[robert harris jr]

that's good i mean that's really good writing / writing comes from a special i beleive and you have it
a spiritual place never the topic the issue the genre but a connection spirit, thanks ROBERT!

[Gee]

Thanks Robert, glad you approve

[Fabian G. Franklin]

As a bloke I think you're sensationally sensual. ;) This was so provocative and yet managed so tastefully; something very challenging to do in erotica. I think you highly underestimate your talent in the genre. Well done, I say.

[Gee]

Thanks Fabian, chuffed you enjoyed.
Hope you are well