Afterglow

Afterglow

She smiled, sighed, closed her eyes and remembered
every second of every hour of the night just passed.
She wouldn't shower, not today, perhaps not even tomorrow
instead she would wear him, inside and out
until the call of life forced her hand,
a hand that slid slowly down into an ever growing wetness.
She smiled, sighed, closed her eyes and remembered,
her hand his, her fingers him...

Author's Note

Not tried this genre before, as a bloke I'm far to "clumsy" :)

Reviews

[Lorry]

Well good morning Gee and firstly may I say congratulations on taking this on the female route, but apologise for this non review because I'll definitely be cancelled if I start talking about lady bits n bobs... so will just enquire about your health and ate those shiftless arseholes still giving you grief and excuses at work?
How's the weather? Did you see that ludicrous display at the weekend? And other manly conversational topics too! 😃

[Emunah June.]

Can I just say, I am absolutely loving the divine, feminine energy your poetry has? I think every girl has had a moment like this, where she's thinking about one or another, and it all is just a beautiful, self written erotica. The language is clumsy in the best way, perfectly mirroring the fantasizing and desire one has in times like these. Its brief, beautiful, relatable, and dare I say, delicious.

[Gee]

Thank you, appreciate your kind words

[Tan-90]

How sweet and innocent are those early days of courtship! Beautiful and delicately penned. Erotic yeeees… but when I read it, it takes me, more to a place of hope and longing, secret giggles..a moment in one’s life where for a short window, everything else feels less burdensome or significant, except for what happened last night.. :) delightful thank you for your words.

[Gee]

Thank you kindly

[Dylan Macadham]

Phewww! I need a smoke, and I don't smoke! ...
I do however have a few night-memories I summon now & then as needed :)
a Sexy write, Gee!

[Gee]

Thanks Dylan

[Jimmy Crapped Corn]

I agree with everyone that this is so well written, tastful and erotic at once.

[Gee]

Thank you sir

[Betty Hermelee]

This really is true love, wow not to shower and keep his essence on her for days…. Amazing and so well expressed…. I can feel the passion in this poem immediately.. so well done Gee!
Warmly
B🌷🌷

[Gee]

Morning Betty, thank you.
Hope you are keeping well

[robert harris jr]

that's good i mean that's really good writing / writing comes from a special i beleive and you have it
a spiritual place never the topic the issue the genre but a connection spirit, thanks ROBERT!

[Gee]

Thanks Robert, glad you approve

[Fabian G. Franklin]

As a bloke I think you're sensationally sensual. ;) This was so provocative and yet managed so tastefully; something very challenging to do in erotica. I think you highly underestimate your talent in the genre. Well done, I say.

[Gee]

Thanks Fabian, chuffed you enjoyed.
Hope you are well

[Soren]

Sensuous, sexual, errotic, romantic soft short and sweet. Lovely

[Gee]

Thanks Soren, am surprised this got had this many comments.
Always appreciate your visits

[Betty Hermelee]

Dear Gee
i feel e softness to this piece
a gentle yet romantic eve and the memories of it, the that she felt strongly about come to the fore…she loved the passion so much that she preferred to keep his scent on her for as long as she could…. a lovey intimate piece….
warmly, B🌷🌷🌷

[Gee]

Thank you Betty :)
Hope all is well with you

[Betty Hermelee]

a pleasure always Gee, thank you for asking🌷🌷
warmly, B