Afterglow

Afterglow

She smiled, sighed, closed her eyes and remembered
every second of every hour of the night just passed.
She wouldn't shower, not today, perhaps not even tomorrow
instead she would wear him, inside and out
until the call of life forced her hand,
a hand that slid slowly down into an ever growing wetness.
She smiled, sighed, closed her eyes and remembered,
her hand his, her fingers him...

Author's Note

Not tried this genre before, as a bloke I'm far to "clumsy" :)

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

You have penned this write so tastefully Gee. Very sensual. Not an ounce of clumsiness there. We have sun this morning. I hope the same for you in MK. Have a great Monday.

Chris

[Gee]

Thanks Christine, appreciate very much your comments.
Cold here today, blustery with rain on the way. Site work is pants at the best of times but even worse when knee deep in mud:) Serves me right for not listening at school

[Chris Shaw]

We need our construction workers. Very important !! Have a good week.

[Arundass TP]

This is a lovable poem with multiple inner meanings I can sort out. Good work

[Gee]

Thank you sir

[Marie]

Wow! A very delicately inked sensual write, Gee. A classic write and absolutely NOTHING 'clumsy' about it at all! Lovely write! Well done, dear Gee. Hope you are keeping well, dear friend...

[Gee]

All well here thanks Marie.
You are the first lady to review this I think all others are shy:)
Thank you

[Marie]

Laughing! No need for the ladies to be shy because the poem is very delicate, nothing vulgar or crude about it. The afterglow around the poem is of a beautiful rainbow, dear Gee. So pleased you are all well. Thank you again, dear friend...

[redd Brick Keshner]

Ah, all there is to tell is that I’ve witnessed that before and relishing the realisation that I did that for them is quite intimate and priceless. (No textbook or film could match that interaction and its afterglow)

[Gee]

Thank you kindly sir

[redzone]

now here is a classy erotic poem. well done Gee, well done!!

Curt

[Gee]

Thank you Curt

[John the Baptist]

Heavy erotic stuff here, Gee. Liked especially the last lines. Nothing like a little solo polo to keep the fire burning.

[Gee]

Thank you JTB

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i like this naughty little poem. it's very suggestive but without going over-the-top. the female persona She is obviously enjoying life and trying to draw out those good feelings. so why shouldn't we all?

[Gee]

Thanks Ern. Folk usually shy away from reviewing writing on the subject of sex etc.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i am fearless.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the subject handled with such subtlety....well done.
j.

[Gee]

Good morning Jacob, thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
Hope you are keeping well

[Neville]

Okay, so what did you do with the chips .. I aint gonna ask again .. this by the way is brill & I aint talkin fish neither squire ..

[Gee]

:))
The chips were eaten as the first cigarette lit.
Hope all is well with you Neville

[Neville]

I once knew that feeling .. I guess it could be worse mate, ta for asking .. take care & give them girls a hug from me would ya please.