He Has A Name

Our main character finally has a name.

 The glowing eyes staring right into his eyes. The air seemed to become still and the temperature dropped. His breath could be seen as it froze in the air. 

The eyes moved out of the darkness to reveal a man. The man had a sinister smile and slowly inches his way towards him. “Jeremy, you surprise me, why do you run?” The man says to him. 

“Who are you?” Jeremy whispers. The man laughs and hisses, “Your creator.” The man points to Jeremy’s neck. Jeremy reaches up and shakes in fear. Two tiny holes of horror send chills through him.

Reviews

[Star Catcher]

Oh, jeez. O_o
That was totally and completely unexpected. Nice!

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Oh!!! I love this new character you have introduced!!