Windless

Enthusiasm dwindles

Like a kite in still air,

Tumbling down with swoops of stealth

And effortless soars of ease,

Diving through a surreptitious brevity

To fall flat at a charmless end.

Reviews

[Dara[DRAMATIC]]

Huh.
Captivating, and though enthusiasm's end might not be, rather charming. Easy and beautiful to read, with a sad, lackluster truth about it. Much loved. 100%

[Anita B Jacques]

Very nice, I liked it before and more so now." To fall flat to a charmless end" great line, Thank you for sharing. God Bless

[Eagle Cruagh]

Are you saying that some guy took the wind
out of your sails ?
Sorry about that.

You have an exceptional command of the language.
The arrangement of your poem shows talent and
imagination.

Thank you for this nice creation.

------ Eagle Cruagh

[Butterflymom]

This is amazing. What a beautiful and brillant piece. Very creative, original, and well done!