Very nice piece. I love all the possibilities - its kind of like radio before tv. You fill in the blanks for yourself instead of being spoonfed everything. Nice.
Such a lot said in so few a wrods, but it adds so much thought, so many f=different scerios, and so many questions, could be a beginning of a story that would hook people in from this one sentence. XX
or, what happens when the Kissing Bandit has to escalate his modus operandi to be satisfied...
LOL, LOL
I could go on, but you've written an outline that could be developed SO many ways . Everyone that comes to this is instantly engaged and goes their merry way fleshing out their own details. Good job!
thank you for posting this. I read gary's work and suspected this was the original, but wasn't sure! Very good ten word story, perhaps you can't trust anyone! : )
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