Change Me.

Please, change me.

I wish I wasn't spoilt.

I wish I wasn't a brat.

I wish I could cope

When things don't go my way.

 

I wish that I didn't get upset

When someone doesn't drop everything

And come running when I scream.

 

I wish that I didn't get angry

Every time I realise my father was right

That night he said “You're a selfish little kid.”.

 

I wish I didn't expect the world

To go the way I planned.

 

But I don't know how to change,

Wishing is all I can do.

 

Please,

Someone

 

Change me.

 

Reviews

[Cdnsurfer]

Hey! I loved this piece because it felt so honest and forthright. An expression of your feelings and thoughts distilled to its essence, and so it was genuine. It isn't so much being changed, although time changes us all, but in becoming comfortable with yourself as you are. But struggle to come to grips with ourselves, as expressed here, is real. Nice piece.

[Emily B]

I think the change is already begun. Such an honest, beguiling write. Honesty is always the best policy in writing.

[Crazy Cat Man]

its a pretty harsh thing for a father to say to his kid. It is the parents fault. great write :D