Secrets

A poem I wrote one day during a free write

Silence is golden until it is broken

Words are precious until they are spoken

Love is priceless but easily wasted

Hate is free and too often hesitated

Lies are obvious, everywhere

Truth is hidden, locked up with care

Secrets are the ones that top them all

They bring joy, happiness, and downfall

They bring tears, laughter, and jealousy

Sometimes they fly around devilishly

Others are invisible

And those are the ones that are the most despicable 

Reviews

[Harley Sapphire]

Agree with this poem so much! Thank you for submitting some work to my group. I really love being able to read your work! My favorite lines are the last two. There is so much truth in them.

[GingerPocky]

Thank you for your review :)

[LayersOfPetals]

I love your poem it is very lovely and with truth to it :)

[GingerPocky]

Thank you for your review :)

[Briana O'Connor]

I absolutely love this! I have no constructive criticism at all! The flow was brilliant. The message was clear. And the emotions were vivid! Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work!

[GingerPocky]

Thank you for your review :)

[Brynn Hawkins]

I love this. It is well-written and I just want to display it in my room. :)

[GingerPocky]

Thank you for your review :)

[FateDictates]

Such great tone and tempo, really enjoyed it and somehow possibly maybe I feel the last 3 sentences need a little work to really slam dunk down the message.

[GingerPocky]

Thank you for your review :)

[Kurayami]

This poem defines secrets. Nicely written.

~Kurayami

[GingerPocky]

Thank you for your review :)