Desire to Remain Lost

I want the Darkness to consume me
For the light is blinding,
I desire the Forest to encircle me
And make me lose my footing,
Let me fall into oblivion
Where I can remain,
For an eternity

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem and I understand the words. Good to be lost in the forest and fall into the oblivion of nature. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Another Mayfly]

Thank you so much, I appreciate your kind words.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Beau Maysey]

Death? Madness? Nature? Depression?
Whatever it is being discussed, you describe it in a nice, visual way.

[Another Mayfly]

Thank you. I'm still not entirely sure what I was discussing. I started with the idea of loneliness but its also a desire to escape to from a complicated world to the simplicity of nothingness.

[P. Kapper]

Been there. A few times I've made it back, but there are times I live there. Short, sweet and definitely to the point

[Another Mayfly]

Thank you very much. I contemplated expanding it but I didn't want to ruin its impact.

[ANM]

We all need to hide sometimes.. well written and impactive!

[Another Mayfly]

Thank you. I thought keeping it shorter would benefit its impact. I was unsure if it wasn't enough though.

[ANM]

Noi think the length was right. Sometimes less is more..