Disappear

Six Word Story

(You are) the wind in my sails and
I am but a ghost in YOUR eardrum,

speaking words of (poetry) that you

will never hear
Are you listening?
And although I stand before you
with eye-filled oceans that could drown the world over
You breathe easy as I choke up from the

(overflowing) of regret

Here's a toast to the broken
"Another, bartender"
Toss them BACK before the poison
enervates the words in-between (my lips)

that brushed against YOURS,
my sweet bittersweet

I want the words to roll off YOUR tongue

like thunder, to drive into me like lightning
We'd dance around the currents and kiss

amidst the flashes,
but you'd only           like
breath on a mirror

Are you listening?

Reviews

[marcus]

Gio, I really like your writing. I find it poignant and touching!!

[Etta Beasley]

"I want the words to roll off YOUR tongue
like thunder, to drive into me like lightning"

I absolutely admire that.. So well written! I look forward to reading more from you..

[Jamestown]

Great job!
I am guessing these 6 words were given to you,
anyways very creative and well written:) Thanks for sharing
and b-blessed!

[Gio S.P.]

Well I wrote this poem and then decided, "I want to have a six word story as well." So I searched my poem without changing a thing and put those words into a story :) And decided to give meaning to the word "Disappear" by giving it its meaning and asserting it as a title. I'm glad that you enjoyed it, friend!