Agonizing void

You know that moment when you need to cry. That moment that everything is so wrong that you are just aching to sob your eyes out to the point that you can’t breathe and just sit there as a crumpled mess on the floor gasping for air in between the sobs.

And then nothing.

Nothing comes out


No tears no screams no gasping

Nothing. As you stare Into the distance and feel your heart tearing itself to pieces silently.

Author's Note

I hope I'm not alone in feeling like this.
Please comment or message me.

Reviews

[Asante]

You definitely aren't alone on feeling that way. This piece is very much universal, yet it speaks to each person individually. Raw, unfiltered, and most importantly, REAL.

Good job. :)

[wordman]

i`m sure many have felt this point in their lives

[KCthelastboyscout]

I think this is very relatable to many people including myself. More shock than sudden emotion.it probably comes later when the pain has time to sink inside of you more