Fear for you

12-30-12 Not happy with this.

You will never understand
For you have been sheltered
Kept from the rotting darkness

Not downplaying your trials
But you are such a child
And I fear for you

I dont want to see you hurt
I dont want to see you cry
But I know you need to grow

I fear the pain you will face
You have to face pain to grow
I fear for you

Reviews

[Serenity Faith]

I loved this!!! It's a different look at innocence, that not many people consider. But you are right, in order for us to grow, to learn, we have to face pain and experience life. It's just part of it. Very well done. I can't believe you're not happy with this?!

[Jeremia]

I often not happy with my writing. To be honest. I just crave to write jaw dropping vivid poetry and I think I've only accomplished that a couple times. But I try. And yes, you have to experience pain to grow, I've grown so much in the last couple months. It's been amazing but sucks at the same time. Thank you btw. :)