Must Move On

Must Move On

A Poem by Jeremia
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started 2-28-11 Finished 4-18-11 Comments welcome. :)

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Here I am Lord, all mixed up

With no place to go,

Struggling just to catch my breath,

Hanging on but not for long

Pushing through

To get to you

While holding tight

To your wondrous might

For you have a plan

To which I must latch on

I must be strong

I must move on.

© 2011 Jeremia


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Jeremia
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I really liked this. It reminded me of a song that my friend wrote.

http://www.facebook.com/david.briner#!/note.php?note_id=386082437263

Truly great. Something we all need to keep in mind.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Pushing through To get to you...it is important to do that..have you done everything to do that?

Posted 14 Years Ago


Jeremia

13 Years Ago

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Jeremia
Jeremia

St Cloud, MN



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Well, my name is Jeremia. I honestly don't believe I have much skill in writing, but I find it entertaining when I am able to crank out a poem and/or story. So my desire is to write and then get feedb.. more..