Destruction, but no longer

I feel like more might be added to this. What are your thoughts? 5-31-12

Tears roll down my face as I realize it’s over

My last remnants of hope shattered

The destruction took out the last bit of fight

Destroying the last bit of will power

 

So much pain caused by your hand

Destroying the perfect little flower you had before you

YOU DESTROYED IT

YOU B*****D

 

Do you not care whom you hurt

Do you not care that the God you professed commands you otherwise

Do you not care about those who care about you

Do you not care that you have a duty

 

What is wrong with you

You destroy everything

I hope you rot

I hope you realize the pain you have caused

 

B*****D

You destructive idiot

WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU

That flower, gone

 

Why can you not seek to build up

Why must you destroy

What is so hard about thinking about things worthy of praise

What is so hard about helping things grow

 

You gave no water

You gave no food

That poor flower

What else was it to do

 

It had to leave, you fool

It had to

You were destroying it

Causing it to wilt

 

It had every right to go

EVERY RIGHT

What is wrong with you

Seriously

 

You push and push

You are afraid

Of what, of yourself?

Do you even realize the monster inside

Do you even realize what you have done

 

That flower, that poor flower

You ruined it

But it’s beauty will still shine

Ha, it’s beauty will still shine

You have lost

Ha, your destruction will go no further on this one

You have lost

 

But alas you have lost the flower

Author's Note

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[That1Nerd23]

Wow...

[Jeremia]

Why just wow?