i dare you

Life ends,

when you stop dreaming,

hope ends,

when you stop believing,

and ,

love ends,

when you stop caring,

so that means my life has ended,

there is no hope,

and,

There is no love for me anymore,

So why don’t i pull the trigger,

End what has already ended,

Or why don’t you safe me a job,

End it for me,

Pull the trigger,

Go on,

Pull it,

I dare you too.

Reviews

[Dalebear]

True and heartfelt poem with lots of emotion

[trapperhoney]

true to life, full of heartfelt emotion.

[Freeman]

A heartfelt poem full of emotion

Great write

[mamabear]

A wonderful read! I really enjoyed this one. Congratulations! I look forward to reading more of your work.

mamabear x

A daring portrayal of a desperate soul crying out to a cold world. I love this one!

[paul]

hey, this is great. simple and great