You Can See Through It

I don’t know if

This pane

Should
Be

In or out,

Cut to pieces,

Held up for a while,

Ignored completely

Painted over,

Or better still,

Make a stained glass
Feature.

Now,

This boat
Always has a mast,

Even when
The sail is down...

 

 

 

© 2007 Llysofar

Reviews

[Pema Dorje]

word play makes this a distinct piece ... and the flow of images as smooth as glass, and that conundrum at the end, leaves us with a beautiful image and a question ...

[John B. Bolling]

Something about this seems so dreary, yet there is a sense of hope, particularly in the lines..

Better still,
Maked a stained glass
Feature.

Complete understated beauty.

Excellent.