Consolation

A Poem by Llysofar

Trauma,

undermining

flimsy trust,

I keel over.

Staring

into space

I am

suddenly aware

of all the rust

that brings down

bridges.

In the end,

everything

will go.

© 2008 Llysofar

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October

This is very meaningful, Goldlilocks, I liked it.
My favorite was:
"Staring
into space
I'm suddenly
aware

of all the rust
that brings down
bridges."
-October

Posted 18 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 8, 2008

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Llysofar

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Aloha, Mahalo - If anyone can remember any of the poetry that was lost, congratulations and thank you {{}}. There is just one I can't find on Google, which I think was called `Fracture'. I'm sorry to .. more..