Kandahar No. 1

For Abdul Lateef Mohammed

 

A thousand years ago you left Kandahar

A thousand years from now you will leave Kandahar

A thousand times remain in between

A thousand times before you will know what has already been seen

A thousand years ago you came to Kandahar

A thousand years from now you will go to Kandahar

With a Ford instead of a camel

Reviews

[Ruth]

Some spiritual factors shall always remain in place and the fact that time may not be linear is an intriguing thought I take from this...however, modernity does move us on...
Awesome! :)

[gombeggar]

well, thank u much

[Felicity's Eve]

That last line made me laugh a little. ^^

Great job! :)

[gombeggar]

thanks :)

[Felicity's Eve]

:)

[lee von cleef]

Fix or repair daily....Harley believer.

[Adam Whitworth]

nice one :)

[gombeggar]

thank u

[WingsToFly]

that was a very good read. :)

[gombeggar]

thanks very much

[John]

The pay off line made me chuckle.

[gombeggar]

thanks...glad u liked it

[Rhianne Ney]

I love the poem it piques up my interest and I found it fun to read ^-^

[gombeggar]

thank u...glad u enjoyed it

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcomezzz