Utopia No. 1

Utopia (no where)

Utopia bears me

Utopia holds me, holds me tight and nearby

Utopia hands me over to the sea and to the sky

 

Anydrus drinks me

Anydrus bathes me

Anydrus sees me flowing through it

 

Oh thank you, Thomas More

Thank you forever and sure

                       Thank you, thank you, again I thank you

For it’s all true history

Riddled with nails

To hold everything in definition and class

To halo everything

 

Cape Frio warm me

Cape Frio hold me

Cape Frio herd me onto your goat chasing cliffs

There be cyclopses there waiting to call me No One

　

　

　

Reviews

[Ruth]

This hits hard...and why oh why don't block that Elusive spammer? :) I am gonna go through your poetry, good to be back here ♥

[gombeggar]

I did block elusive...but I left all his posts so ALL can see he's got a LOT of growing up to do

[gombeggar]

oh...and nice to have u back...yer always welcome, girl :)

[Ruth]

Ah, good darlin!!! And so welcome xx

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

If this is poetry then call me father christmas. This is so piss poor, in fact I can smell the urine emanating off both your breath and your so called poetry. I suggest you write nursery rhyme books or something ;)

[gombeggar]

go pout elsewhere

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Ok, Rudyard ;)

[Emily B]

maybe, gom, you should use smaller words, he's floundering

acting out to cover up his insecurities

[gombeggar]

how many 'ugh's and 'umm's do i have 2 cobble together for such dullerds?

[Emily B]

ah, be a little patient, no child left behind

[gombeggar]

ahh, yes...agreed...must take the children by the hand slowly

[Zahra]

very interesting writing style. Good one.

[gombeggar]

thanks much

[Malark]

Very nice!

[lee von cleef]

Damn fermented goat cheese , I knew I misplaced it and now I think you have spread it thick with chic peas and some old Greek bread,wash it down with a little port,I think that should clear up any residual effects.

[gombeggar]

ouzo...gotz to be ouzo...and u forgot the olives..how could u forget them?

[Butch Decatoria]

woh, i am blown away...great write. there are obvious references I do not know, but i am glad to have read this

[gombeggar]

well, glad u liked this...happy new year 2 u