No One Seems To Notice

Searching for that moment of fame

 

No One Seems To Notice

Finding the world of poetry, really hard to crack,

writing prolifically, but no one seems to notice,

I'll pay my dues, I'll accept the hardened facts,

I'd gladly except criticism, but no one seems to notice,

Someone please tell me, on just what should I focus,

looking for direction, but no one seems to notice,

should I write about love affairs, or some silly hocus-pocus,

tell me I'm a hack. but no one seems to notice,

I leave messages to Blue Rose, hoping that she'll see,

I'd love to share my thoughts, but no one seems to notice,

I've read her poems diligently, I've shared her fantasy,

her Rapture of a Dream, but she does not seem to notice,

Gomer LePoet...

Reviews

[Ruth]

No one seems to notice anything of late love! lmao This is great piece. One of your more powerful ones I feel, bust a gut and do people notice? lol Hugs xx

[deeps]

I really enjoyed this write here,
This is amazing.

[Wicahpi]

Wake up in the morning and the first thought to cross your mind,
write about it. Just a suggestion? lol

Just write and not worry about the 'fame'.
Peace n Light,
Wicahpi

[Tyler Pryor]

I love your topic, its one we can all relate to as writters. your rhyme and word mastery are clear in this peice.