Narrow Passages (for the Image Group)

narrow view - change anew

 

Narrow Passages(for the Image Group)

Walking through passages narrow

searching for the whistling sparrow

feeling chill down through marrow

tunnel vision encloses my view

opening eyes to things anew

opening ears listening for you

opening heart thoughts seeking true

widen these passages allowing light

Gomer LePoet...

Reviews

[Gandré]

this looks like idea of mental holism which is the doctrine that the identity of a belief content (or the meaning of a line that expresses it) is determined by its place in the web of beliefs. Some people search for meaning their whole life. good job!!

[Ruth]

Wonderful imagery:) Excellent imagery xx