Beatle Bomb

a tribute to the Fab Four

 

Beatle Bomb

I should have known better, but if I fell, can you tell me why?

I'm happy just to dance with you, anytime at all,

you can't do that, if you love me do,

I want to hold your hand, and your bird can sing too,

said you was a taxman, it was a hard days night,

you can drive my car, but you wont see me,

I'm looking through you, but you're nowhere man,

had a ticket to ride, eight days a week,

it was only yesterday, when I met the day tripper,

we can work it out, with the paperback writer,

we called Eleanor Rigby and Penny Lane,

and now it's getting better, with a little help from my friends,

You say “Helllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllooooooooooooooooo”

I say “Goodbye”,

You say “Helllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllooooooooooooooooo”

I say “Goodbye”,

I was living in a glass onion with Dear Prudence,

I said help! Lady Maddona, won't you just let it be,

Martha my dear, took her Blackbird and Piggies

while Rocky Racoon and Bungalow Bill had wild honey pie

Julia and Sexy Sadie had honey pie for their birthday

while there was a revolution back in the U.S.S.R

it was helter skelter but everybody's got something

but I'm getting better, fixing a hole, using Maxwell's silver hammer

and mean Mr Mustard was chasing Polythene Pam

so she came in through the bathroom window

guess it is time to just Let it be

You say “Helllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllooooooooooooooooo”

I say “Goodbye”,

You say “Helllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllooooooooooooooooo”

I say “Goodbye”,

Gomer LePoet...

Author's Note

a walk thru the musical world of the fabulous Beatles

Reviews

[Bunny Thumper]

The beatles rockkk!
WOOOOO HOOOOOOOOO!
AGAIN GREAT FREAKIN JOB MAN !

[aftervision]

i love the walk with one of the best groups to ever come along my poet -- might just pull some of them old records off the shelf tonight and tilt the bottle to my favor

[Albatross]

Shoot. I almost missed the Beatles. Clean and upbeat construction and flow. Loved this, an amusing and fun tribute to one of the awesomest bands evah!

[Dom]

Love it! Now I have the song Let It Be stuck in my head again. Look what you've done lol. Great poem. If you haven't seen Across the Universe, you should. Its a musical thats dedicated to the Beatles and its really good. Awesome job! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I was lucky. I live the complete life cycle of the Beatles. I like most of their sounds. The sixties had so much good music. It was a good time to be alive. I like the poem. Took me a trip om memory lane. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sera]

very bright up beat and lively, great omage

[Devons]

High levels of amusement GLP! I love the weirdness of this mad poem; and i especially like the 'Hellooooooooooo' parts (you can almost hear someone saying it). This, however, is my favourite line:-

"but I'm getting better, fixing a hole, using Maxwell's silver hammer"

If ever the title 'Maxwell's silver hammer' somehow fitted in, then it is in this crazy line.
Funny stuff.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

The Beatles were and are the pioneers of it all.. great songs!
All tied in to make a really nice tribute to the band that changed the face of music ... loved it!

Chloe

[Ruth]

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS lol
Awesome hon!
Beatles were so cool! lol
xx

[deeps]

OMGoodness this is cute and wonderful.
Enjoyable to read.