Two Dogs

just a silly poem about my two old dogs aged 15 and 12

 

Two Dogs

I have 2 old dogs you see,

they never stop bugging me,

they always need to poop or pee,

or beg saying please feed me

they drive me up a frigin wall,

their incestent panting in the hall,

they have plenty of water for all,

with fans blowing breezes like fall

they always have a pain or an itch,

keeping them happy is a b***h,

but I love watching them twitch,

at least they don't ever snitch

yes I've had these two critters so long,

I've even written them a song,

it will be sad when they are gone,

they're my pals, can that be so wrong.

Gomer LePoet...

Author's Note

dogs are people to?

Reviews

[emmah]

its such a lovely verse, and so easy to relate to for me, as a reader - i do love dogs too, and they are so much a part of the family. right from when they are kids to when they are old and gray, they bring the pure kind of joy, which often "people" don't! they really are good pals. and they stay around, long after they're gone! loved the funny quips and bits and pieces of both your dogs, lovingly strewn in this song! what a lovely dedication to them!

[Albatross]

This is cute:) I have three ginormous dogs, they consistently and constantly drive me insane. But if any of them died I'd cry. Life lets us take things for granted.

[Rory CJ Frankson]

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Wow Gomer. Too cool. I have dogs, a black lab cross, 6 Pomeranian's, 2 cats an a goat. plenty ah feed me feed me an cleaning up pee going on here, and mowing lawns, and keeping up with the weeds 2.2 acres ah pain in the a*s. Bliss...

I relate man and still have time for guitar.

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Romon in Review. 05/28/10. 6:50am
Quesnel BC CANADA Heart & Soul Peace, an pet em up, always.
Brings on a wag.

[MissWordSmith]

loving and funny at the same time.
being a dog lover i can totally relate. i used to have a dog who was the most loving, caring, protective, motherly animal there was, and i miss her so much now.
it was a pleasure reading this.
i feel like the second stanza can be improved, but that's about it.
great!

[aftervision]

my old dog just resently died -- it was a sad time for me

[zombiikillah666]

this makes me want a hotdog..i think cause the picture.
yummmmm xD
this is cute..i like it alot. (: great poem (:

[Liza]

funny; i enjoyed the smart sarcasm. I have a dog too and he's my pal - cool write.

[Ruth]

Too right!
They certainly are hon!
Dogs are great!
xx

[ettorney]

The first two stanzas are why I own cats. The last two stanzas are why I wish I had a dog.

Nice rhyme, nice write.

[Sera]

Aww.. i never heard a poem an author dedicated to theyre dogs and its sooo cute and nice to read something so light and happy. you incorperated rhyme very well developing a strong lively poem

[deeps]

This is cute, well written