Nice Hawaiian Punch

drink of choice

 

Nice Hawaiian Punch

I was standin there you see,

I wusn't expectin nutten,

when she double sucker-punched me in the gut

my belly revolted badly,

fowl words were on the button,

civil conversations like a pairing knife cut

It's been in the works you see,

we've been beggin for a fight,

the pressure is too much for you to take

so when I wasn't lookin',

first you threw a left and then a right,

and that is why now my belly ache

 

now the truth is setting in,

my waves have settled down,

a big mistake has reared it's ugly head,

my world will be in sorrow,

my presence banished from this town,

a nice Hawaiian punch the pain I dread

Gomer LePoet...

Reviews

[Desert Dreamer]

What a great rhyme! Lots of fun reading your poems.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

David, another laugh for me and i need them, thank you~
It is good to read something light and refreshing , rather like the drink.. but with more punch and humor!

Chloe

[SamBug]

This was also very good. I love the humor you use in your poetry. It's not always as serious and lovey dovey as all the others. Great job. I give you two thumbs up!