Block Party

trying to loosen up the blocked up thoughts

 

 

Block Party

I seemed to be blocked, I don't know why,

suddenly I have absolutely nothing to say

been pondering ideas, trying to apply,

it's been going on, this whole entire day

went for a nice long drive, to a town up the road,

a little town surrounded by many many lakes

stopped for lunch, set down my tired load,

had baked chicken dinner, and tasty crumb cakes

listening to tunes, from a local country dude,

David Nail is the name, the name he goes by

he's a real cool singer, I like his attitude,

broken hearted lyrics, make you wanna cry

now it seems I'm, beginning to feel free,

words are coming out, from every direction

my toes are tapping, might be time for a party,

need to buy some beer, take up a collection

writing is such a strange strange thing,

sometimes the thoughts explode, they just flow

right now I have, this crazy urge to sing,

maybe I should call my girl, and let her know

how much I love her, how much I really care,

how I wish, she was here right now with me

has your block now gone away, it's a party take down your hair,

won't you please dance with me, Dreamer can't you see

don't be frightened anymore, if you can just breathe the air,

know the danger is over, I hope so anyway

one more trip around the floor, get out of that chair,

suddenly I'm free again, going to be a super day

Gomer LePoet...

Author's Note

Create a MySpace Playlist at MixPod.com

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

You don't seem blocked now. This was fun to read .. a party sounds good to me..
David Nail sings well... and you do too!
This also made me remember i forgot lunch .. baked chicken sounds good... crumb cakes i don't know .. really enjoyed reading this and hope the block stays away!

Chloe

[Desert Dreamer]

Let's dance and sing a song about freedom and imagination, let the creativity flow! What a fun poem. Thank you! :)

[Ruth]

To find freedom through words is stifling when there is a block!
Dance and sing my friend lol Cures almost all ailments! lol
xx

[deeps]

This is wonderful, i like this

[Coyote Poetry]

Freedom is a two-side coin. Nice to have the guarantee of a warm body. I likes the feel and flow of this story. I like being free and single. I roam the USA with the Army for 12 years and had a great time. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[The Analog Kid]

Nice playful write GLP! Block Party! Let's go!