Ionized

cosmic love

 

Ionized

my atoms are being supercharged,

can't tell if that's a positive thing

when my electrons receive a gain,

I have this tendancy to dance and sing

particles here and particles there,

paired or not doesn't matter

even or odd is still the same,

hard to stablizie with all the clatter

cosmic dust results from collisions,

now the protons are taking charge

its the same thing for the molecules,

the small as well as the large

the charging particle is the ion,

can't deny there is an attraction

like the soul of a searching lover,

reaching for it's matching faction

the lips caress the positive,

while the eyes seek out connection

life from the past, life from the future,

once again brought into the collection

sparkling kisses in the comets tail,

the fiery head's mission realized

supernova explosions are all around,

good God almighty, I've been ionized

Gomer LePoet...

Reviews

[The Analog Kid]

Cool motif, GLP. Sure you should make this lyrics.....because....This reminds me of....


Chemistry, by Rush



Signal transmitted
Message received
Reaction making impact
Invisibly

Elemental telepathy
Exchange of energy
Reaction making contact
Mysteriously

Eye to I
Reaction burning hotter
Two to one
Reflection on the water
H to O
No flow without the other
Oh but how
Do they make contact
With one another?

Electricity? Biology?
Seems to me it's Chemistry

Emotion transmitted
Emotion received
Music in the abstract
Positively

Elemental empathy
A change of synergy
Music making contact
Naturally

One, two, three
Add without subtraction
Sound on sound
Multiplied reaction
H to O
No flow without the other
Oh, but how
Do we make contact
With one another?

[Desert Dreamer]

We are all made of cosmic particles, reading your poem reminds me that I am part of the universe. Your style of writing fits perfectly with the addition of bits of science. Dancing and singing relate so well with being ionized, I love this relationship.

[Liza]

the reader learns so much through this writing
i admire the way you mix science into your art
it truly does feel like we are just chemical reactions being catalyzed through something or out into another vibration
excellent

[?]

awesome or should I say far out dude
This is really cool Dave
This my favorite lines
the fiery head's mission realized

supernova explosions are all around,

good God almighty, I've been ionized

[Ruth]

All universal beauty and internal connection are versed here, a clever poem love
xx

[Dupree]

Very cleverly written. It's rather impressive though i don't think you should turn it into a song.

[zombiikillah666]

anything with dr.seuss writing...i like!! xD
such a super duper awesome poem.... (:

[Color Me Gone]

Clever and songworthy~

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Absolutely awesome!